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Mannytsu, September 7th, 2008, 7:25 am ( Reply )

late... - This page came late. I´m sorry. but I published two pages at one time!!

i really like Kais faces in this page.

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Mannytsu, March 19th, 2009, 9:40 am ( Reply )

- gaiadarkstar: Thanks for those tips. The first one was just my misspelling, but thanks for telling me ^^

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  WAAH?? ( Reply )

What happened to my career? ó__ò

oh well, never mind, no mistakes! ;)) (at least what i can see.. o__o)

muikku-san <3

posted by GrazyTomato (Guest) on September 7th, 2008, 1:06 pm





 
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It is so cute but just a few grammer problems. If you want help. "Give me good escuse" should be "Give ma a good excuse!". Also "I don't know. He just got bored of waiting you." should be "I don't know. He just got bored waiting for you." I hope that helpsd a little and didn't offend you. Good job so far.

posted by gaiadarkstar on March 19th, 2009, 7:28 am



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